Betrayal, War, Redemption, a pokemon fanfic Ch.30Ch. 30: The Lady Thetis
Displays a great love and thought for his characters and story. Has great cohesion and development. Has me coming back for more. Has a uniqueness all it's own which can be said all chapters in this story. Terraluna has in him great working to be fanatastic writer. His development and study of ancient Gods and Goddess gives this tale an intereting twist that some would have never seen coming. The actions and feelings given off by his characters speaks volumes off this man's creative genius and his personality. I maybe making sound long winded but if were to read from chapter 1 to now has never wanting it to end. If you joyed this read his Warhammer 40k crossover with Sailor Moon.
My thanks, brother of the Imperium. Consider yourself a close battle-brother, if you like the Ultramarines. Which Chapter do you like?
Ave Imperator. The Emperor Protects.
First fell in love the Ultramarines but I have a great love the Sons of Dorn and his successors. please right some more of the Sailor Moon crossover!
Well, I am in the stages of the thirteenth chapter. Hint: Sailor Moon and the others are about to be.....brought into the Legions. They will learn from the Astartes.
Please, no criticism. I have my plans of making them as equal or as close to an Astartes as possible.
Why should I critize you are the author. Just don't stray to far but can I suggest something?
You may. I accept suggestions, son of Dorn.
Have Serenity meet the Emperor and Have him knock some sense into her by how he was pacifistic then he created the Imperium. It is just a suggestion.