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Displays a great love and thought for his characters and story. Has great cohesion and development. Has me coming back for more. Has a uniqueness all it's own which can be said all chapters in this story. Terraluna has in him great working to be fanatastic writer. His development and study of ancient Gods and Goddess gives this tale an intereting twist that some would have never seen coming. The actions and feelings given off by his characters speaks volumes off this man's creative genius and his personality. I maybe making sound long winded but if were to read from chapter 1 to now has never wanting it to end. If you joyed this read his Warhammer 40k crossover with Sailor Moon.
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terraluna5 Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My thanks, brother of the Imperium. Consider yourself a close battle-brother, if you like the Ultramarines. Which Chapter do you like?

Ave Imperator. The Emperor Protects.
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Retartacus Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
First fell in love the Ultramarines but I have a great love the Sons of Dorn and his successors. please right some more of the Sailor Moon crossover!
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terraluna5 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, I am in the stages of the thirteenth chapter. Hint: Sailor Moon and the others are about to be.....brought into the Legions. They will learn from the Astartes.

Please, no criticism. I have my plans of making them as equal or as close to an Astartes as possible.
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Retartacus Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Why should I critize you are the author. Just don't stray to far but can I suggest something?
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terraluna5 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You may. I accept suggestions, son of Dorn.
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Retartacus Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Have Serenity meet the Emperor and Have him knock some sense into her by how he was pacifistic then he created the Imperium. It is just a suggestion.
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terraluna5 Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Believe me, that is my plan. But not even that will cause her to change her ways. No, my way......involves the Primogenitor himself. You know who I mean.
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Retartacus Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I do Brother-Librarian just don't tell me anymore I must be excited!
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